Picture #1: missing space between "[Barter]" and "Show":
Also:
"...you'll not find anywhere in the wasteland" should be
"...you'll not find anywhere
else in the wasteland".
Junkyard (when talking to Melsak). He says: "He his a brahmin herdsman..."
Also:
"He likes one place in forest not far from here." should be something along the lines of:
"He likes this one spot in a forest not far from here."
or: (depending on the meaning, I'm not exactly sure of the context here)
"He lives in a part of the forest not far from here."
The last line needs to be aligned (Junktown; the chick in the generator room):
"...with some kind of tools." should either be:
"...with some kind of tool."
or:
"....with various kinds of tools."
And the j in "junktown" should be capital.
Missing spaces after square brackets (Hub; Oldtown gun trader):
The "i" in the first sentence should be capital.
"would gladly" sounds better was "
will gladly"
"Of course let's due without any unecessary issues." sounds much better as:
"Of course
, we can make do without any
unnecessary issues
, right?"
