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[Dialog] Random conversation typos
« on: July 07, 2013, 13:21 »
Picture #1: "redding" instead of "Redding":



Picture #2: missing space between "Actually" and "I":


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Re: [Dialog] Random conversation typos
« Reply #1 on: July 07, 2013, 13:44 »
Alright, made sticky, this is fixed and keep em coming.

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Re: [Dialog] Random conversation typos
« Reply #2 on: July 07, 2013, 16:56 »
Picture #1: missing space between "[Barter]" and "Show":


Picture#2: missing space between "[Barter]" and "I":

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Re: [Dialog] Random conversation typos
« Reply #3 on: July 07, 2013, 20:22 »
Junkyard (when talking to Melsak). He says: "He his a brahmin herdsman..."


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Re: [Dialog] Random conversation typos
« Reply #4 on: July 08, 2013, 05:47 »
Err.. this isn't dialogue just Scenery text, but I guess I'll put it here. Feel free to split it, etc.


  • "wehicle" should be "vehicle"
  • "is quiet in" should be is in quite a"

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Re: [Dialog] Random conversation typos
« Reply #5 on: July 09, 2013, 18:24 »
Gun trader in Hub (Oldtown). It should be "somewhere" instead of "somwhere":




The last line needs to be aligned (Junktown; the chick in the generator room):




Missing spaces after square brackets (Hub; Oldtown gun trader):

« Last Edit: July 09, 2013, 18:53 by Merle »

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Re: [Dialog] Random conversation typos
« Reply #6 on: July 10, 2013, 14:32 »
Picture #1: missing space between "[Barter]" and "Show":
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Also:
"...you'll not find anywhere in the wasteland" should be
"...you'll not find anywhere else in the wasteland".

Junkyard (when talking to Melsak). He says: "He his a brahmin herdsman..."

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Also:
"He likes one place in forest not far from here." should be something along the lines of:
"He likes this one spot in a forest not far from here."
or: (depending on the meaning, I'm not exactly sure of the context here)
"He lives in a part of the forest not far from here."


The last line needs to be aligned (Junktown; the chick in the generator room):
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"...with some kind of tools." should either be:
"...with some kind of tool."
or:
"....with various kinds of tools."

And the j in "junktown" should be capital.

Missing spaces after square brackets (Hub; Oldtown gun trader):

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The "i" in the first sentence should be capital.

"would gladly" sounds better was "will gladly"

"Of course let's due without any unecessary issues." sounds much better as:
"Of course, we can make do without any unnecessary issues, right?"
« Last Edit: July 10, 2013, 14:59 by Ganado »

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Re: [Dialog] Random conversation typos
« Reply #7 on: July 10, 2013, 14:47 »
@Ganado, thanks for all the corrections. I'm gonna keep my eyes open better next time, instead of just skimming through and noting only the obvious errors.

Cheers!

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Re: [Dialog] Random conversation typos
« Reply #8 on: July 15, 2013, 20:48 »
"He likes one place in forest not far from here." should be something along the lines of:
"He likes this one spot in a forest not far from here."

"...with some kind of tools." should either be:
"...with some kind of tool."

Fixed all, found some other mistakes and involved in next update pack, except this and one scenery object description what I will do together with the Russian text fix.

Not sure, but how do you perceive tools as a mistake, it's just plural. Also I will not correct Melsak in that way, I think Mike Wall intended to simplify his language here and there since he is a tribal after all.

When more typos will gather, I will again overlook them.
« Last Edit: July 15, 2013, 20:52 by T-888 »

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Re: [Dialog] Random conversation typos
« Reply #9 on: July 16, 2013, 10:55 »
the dialog with caravan leader is a bit typoish
mecinaries(should be mercenaries or smth) and more, explore all dialog
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Re: [Dialog] Random conversation typos
« Reply #10 on: July 20, 2013, 18:09 »
In description of Fire Gecko Pelt you can find information that skin is golden.

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Re: [Dialog] Random conversation typos
« Reply #11 on: July 22, 2013, 21:17 »
I know it's beta, released too early... and all that... but seriously...
Games are meant to be created, not played...


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Re: [Dialog] Random conversation typos
« Reply #12 on: July 23, 2013, 05:29 »
I know it's beta, released too early... and all that... but seriously...
LAWL

Also found these:
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That would be:
"Hi, I am Terminal. What do you want?"
Or a bit more elegant:
"Hello, I am Terminal. What can I do for you today?"
Assuming that the terminal's name is "Terminal". ;)
Also "Player" is not written with capital letter -> "player"
And
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It's "successful" of course.
« Last Edit: July 23, 2013, 05:34 by BLDYMSS »

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Re: [Dialog] Random conversation typos
« Reply #13 on: July 23, 2013, 11:12 »
Pfff. I fixed the terminal and forwarded it in one of the update packs, but it wasn't updated ...

I know it's beta, released too early... and all that... but seriously...

Looks like touch of Wesan with the elegance of Wichura. ;D

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Re: [Dialog] Random conversation typos
« Reply #14 on: July 24, 2013, 23:53 »
I know it's beta, released too early... and all that... but seriously...

Looks like touch of Wesan with the elegance of Wichura. ;D

Naah, wichura had nothing to do with this dialog. When i was writing it i was influenced by forum situation, (community not reading kenny, profession seller's etc.) So i threw this small "Easter Egg"  ;)
Maybe for one time someone will read my shit :D